Point of View

A few days ago I decided to tell Norah's story with a duel point of view. My two favorite authors, Elle Kennedy and Kristen Callihan both use duel points of view. I think it helps give the reader feel more connected to the characters. 

 I recently finished Play, by Kylie Scott  and it was just told from the heroine's point of view. I didn't mind in this story because Mal's dialogue was so enjoyable that I felt like I didn't need to be in his head. 

 I think the reason I like the duel point of view idea though is that I enjoy the misunderstandings between characters. I mean, sometimes it makes me want to scream, JUST SAY WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY, at my kindle, but it's part of what makes this genera enjoyable for me. I think telling bits of the story from Riley's perspective will also help me learn more about his character. 

 When you're reading romance, whose point of view do you prefer? 

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