Present tense v Past tense: it's making me tense
I'm two pages into my third story, "Working Title: Arranged" and there's a scene where Drake is talking to his dad. As I'm writing, the characters are saying things, but I haven't used the word said once. A little back story, as a writer and a reader, I hate seeing the same word over and over and over and over.. (do you see what I did there?) Because I am attuned to this, especially when grading my own student's work. So, when I started writing dialogue I was alarmed at how many times I used the word said . I did a bit a research into my dilemma, I think I was in high school at the time and I found something along that lines of: use said instead of synonyms- it's tried and true for a reason. I've attributed this idea to Stephen King's On Writing , but I'm not 100% sure that's where I read that bit of advice. Anyway, as I'm writing "Working Title: Arranged" I realized I've used says and not said . Then, holy cow,...